1、Unit 4 Friends Forever-Writing an Ending to a StoryFriends forever丰富对友谊的认知和理解丰富对友谊的认知和理解掌握正确的交友原则和方式掌握正确的交友原则和方式表达表达:友谊的真谛友谊的真谛Starting out&Starting out&Vocabulary Vocabulary 第第1 1课时课时Using language(1):Using language(1):Attributive clauses(1)Attributive clauses(1)第第3 3课时课时Using language(2):Using lan
2、guage(2):Keywords of friendshipKeywords of friendship第第4 4课时课时Understanding ideasUnderstanding ideas:Click for a FriendClick for a Friend第第2 2课时课时Developing ideasDeveloping ideas:After:After Twenty YearsTwenty Years第第5 5课时课时Writing:Writing:Continuation Continuation writingwriting第第6 6课时课时Presenting
3、ideasPresenting ideas&ReviewReview第第7 7课时课时单元大观念：丰富对友谊的认知，掌握正确的交友原则和方式，珍惜朋友单元大观念：丰富对友谊的认知，掌握正确的交友原则和方式，珍惜朋友间的友谊，最终形成正确的价值观。间的友谊，最终形成正确的价值观。Listening:Listening:Helping our friendsHelping our friends第第4 4课时课时1 23 4CharactersPlotSettingThemeReview BobJimmyWellsloyal,devoted and responsibleloyal,ambitio
4、us and faithful plain clothes manpatient,careful and responsiblefriendcolleaguestrangerCharactersOn a cold and dark night,Bob kept his word to meet his best friend at the old restaurant in New York.Jimmy Wells arrived there on time but he recognized that his childhood friend was wanted in C hicag o.
5、Because he could not do it by h i m s e l f,h e g o t a p l a i n clothes to arrest Bob.Plot+SettingSeveral years later,Bob was finally released from jail,please write an ending to the story.TaskBrainstorm1)How did Bob feel when he finally got out of jail?2)After Bob was released from jail,do you th
6、ink Bob and Jimmy can still be friends?Why?Think and share your idea.waiting for Jimmyarrested got out of jail.shamefulhopelessnervousexcited?List adjectives to describe Bobs feelings.helplessdepressedlost anxious BobJimmyBrainstorm2)After Bob was released from jail,do you think Bob and Jimmy can st
7、ill be friends?Why?Bob1)1)my best chum/the finest chap in the my best chum/the finest chap in the worldworld2)just like two brothers2)just like two brothers3)But I know Jimmy will meet me 3)But I know Jimmy will meet me here if hes alive,for he always was here if hes alive,for he always was the true
8、st,staunchest old chapthe truest,staunchest old chap in the in the world.Hell never forget.world.Hell never forget.Read Read the given ending for the first time.Try to answer the following questions.1)How many people are there?Who are they?2)Where did the story happen?3)Why did not Jimmy turn up?4)I
9、f you were Jimmy,would you feel ashamed of having a friend like Bob?5)What kind of ending is this?After reading,answer the following questions.1)How many people are there?Who are they?Question Bob?A 58-year-old man who was realeased from jail just now.A familiar-looking man in his thirties.2)Where d
10、id the story happen?Question the cold wind3)Why did not Jimmy turn up?Question4)If you were Jimmy,would you feel ashamed of having a friend like Bob?(Open)A friend in need is a friend indeed.Question5)What kind of ending is this?Question a happy and surprising ending How can we write a good ending?H
11、ow can we bring our story to life?Read Read the given ending again.Underline what impresses you.ActionsStepping out of jail into the cold wind,Bob,now 58,felt lost and helpless.Doubtfully,Bob unfolded the note.His hands were shaking by the time he had finished reading.create an atmospheredrive the p
12、lotDialogue“Twenty years is a long time,”“Was he ashamed of having a friend like me?”“Youre Jimmys son.”“Yes,sir,”“And my name is Bob.”psychological descriptionCoherence“.”he smiled bitterly,not knowing where to go.“.”Bob shouted in surprise.Doubtfully,.integralitypsychological descriptionBefore wri
13、ting,finish your own 4-square map with the help of textbook(P44,45,47),which maybe of great help for your writing.Here is an example:Task“Twenty years is a long time,”“Was he ashamed of having a friend like me?”.unfolded the noteHis hands were shaking.drag out of/chat/hustle around .He smiled bitter
14、ly,not knowing where to go.Well,.习作研讨draft Bob,a criminal,is stepping out of jail now.He is happy not only he has stepped,but also his good friend,Jimmy,invent him to his home last night.“In this moment,Im people,not a criminal.”Bob say,so I can talk with he in freedom.We have corresponded for many
15、years.We are the best friends now.He sees two man having a chat.He start thinking,“In the past,Im a bad people and he is a policeman.Can we talk like they.I order to give him a good expression,what shoud I say?”“Hi”“Long time noe see.”Maybe I can give he a gift.Yes,a gift that show our friendship.”B
16、ecause of this,he goes to a flower shop and buy some flowers to Jimmys home.“Hi,Jimmy,your best friend.Bob,is coming.”However,there is a woman open the door.“Why do you know my husband,he has died two years.Who are you!”“Wait,he is die.Are you crazy!”He tole me come here with a letter last night!”“B
17、ut he told me send the letters that he has writed for two years to a jail,and give it to a man call Bob.”Bob freeze,and his flowers drop on the floor.A 20 years is past,next 20 years also is part.He doesnt talk with his friend Jimmy face to face.Assessment Checklist评分项目12345Content(reasonable)OGramm
18、ar(accurate)OCoherence(proper)OSpelling(accurate)OPunctuation(accurate)OHandwriting(neat)OscoreyoursPartnersTeachers O 20draft1.Because of this,he goes to a flower shop and buy some flowers to Jimmys home.Because of this,he went to a flower shop and bought some flowers to Jimmy.MistakeGrammarTensedr
19、aft2.He sees two man having a chat.He start thinking.He saw two men chatting with each.MistakeGrammarPlural Form(N)draft3.Why do you know my husband,he has died two years.Why do you know my husband?He died two years ago.MistakeGrammar Verbsdraft4.His good friend,Jimmy,invent him to his home last nig
20、ht.His good friend,Jimmy,invited him to his home last night.5.I order to give him a good expression,what should I say?In order to give him a good expression,what should I say?MistakeSpelling draft6.“Hi,Jimmy,your best friend.Bob is coming.”“Hi,Jimmy.Your best friend,Bob is coming.”MistakePunctuation
21、draft6.“Hi,Jimmy,your best friend.Bob is coming.”“Hi,Jimmy.Your best friend,Bob is coming.”MistakePunctuationdraft Bob,a criminal,is stepping out of jail now.He is happy not only he has stepped,but also his good friend,Jimmy,invent him to his home last night.“In this moment,Im people,not a criminal.
22、”Bob say,so I can talk with he in freedom.We have corresponded for many years.We are the best friends now.He sees two man having a chat.He start thinking,“In the past,Im a bad people and he is a policeman.Can we talk like they.I order to give him a good expression,what shoud I say?”“Hi”“Long time no
23、e see.”Maybe I can give he a gift.Yes,a gift that show our friendship.”Because of this,he goes to a flower shop and buy some flowers to Jimmys home.“Hi,Jimmy,your best friend.Bob,is coming.”However,there is a woman open the door.“Why do you know my husband,he has died two years.Who are you!”“Wait,he
24、 is die.Are you crazy!”He tole me come here with a letter last night!”“But he told me send the letters that he has writed for two years to a jail,and give it to a man call Bob.”Bob freeze,and his flowers drop on the floor.A 20 years is past,next 20 years also is part.He doesnt talk with his friend J
25、immy face to face.Polished version Stepping out of jail,Bob felt joyful,for his old chum,Jimmy,invited him that night.“At that moment,I feel as if I were not a criminal any more.”Bob said.After watching two men chatting,he asked himself,“Is it possible for us to go back to the past?He is a policeman
26、,while I am a released prisoner.”Lost and anxious,he thought maybe a gift could be helpful.Then,he rushed to a flower shop.With a bunch of sunflowers in hand,he headed to Jimmys apartment.“Hi,Jimmy,this is your best friend,Bob!”A few minutes later,the door opened with an unfamiliar-looking lady in h
27、er 50s.“Excuse me?May I help you?”“Is Jimmy home?”Bob asked.“My husband died three years ago!”The lady answered.“Are you kidding?These are his letters.”Bob asked with an astonished expression.“Hello,Bob.This is your last letter from Jimmy.”Tom stood there,dumbstruck,tears rolling down on the envelope addressed to“my best lifelong friend Bob”.Review1)What should we do before writing an ending to a story?2)How can we write a good ending?3)In order to polish our ending,what should we do?HomeworkPolish yours and your partners endings according to the given assessment checklist.THANK YOU
