1、1Unit 6WritingNews reportGuidance新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事件给予明确的、实事求是的报道。新闻报道和新闻评论有时候是结合在一起的,所以在讲述事实之后,可以发表作者的评论。新闻报道的语言偏正式,要求具体、准确、精练。人称可以用第三人称或第一人称。在时态方面,叙述事件用过去时,评论常用一般现在时。Layout新闻报道往往分四个部分来写。第一部分:标题。第二部分:导语。大体交代新闻事件,主要包含新闻事件发生的时间、地点、所涉及的人物及缘由等。第三部分:主体。描述事件过程。第四部分:结语。总结全文或发表评论。Useful Express
2、ions1导语部分According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after graduation.The weather was fine, and a large number of people went to climb the West Hill.Great changes have taken place in China.Thanks to Project Hope, great changes have taken place in t
3、his western country school.2主体部分To solve the problem, some measures should be taken.As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our everyday life.The number of the injured in the accident has reached more than 12.3结束语部分We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.With the r
4、apid development of society, our country will surely have a brighter future.I suggest that the government should do something more to solve the serious problems.We have every reason to believe that the development will be a great success.Exercise5 月 25 日,你校学生会组织了为西藏地震灾区捐款的活动。同学们踊跃参加,共筹得善款 35 000 元。假
5、如你是校英语报的记者李华,请按以下要点2用英语写一则新闻报道。1时间、地点、任务、活动;2同学们的反应。注意:1词数 100 左右;2报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计入总词数);3可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Students Donate Money to Disaster Area_By Li Hua,School NewspaperLayout第一步:明确要求该写作属于应用文新闻报道,主要报道为西藏地震灾区捐款的活动,故应该用一般过去时;以第一、三人称为主。第二步: 确定段落首段:活动简介中段:活动背景及活动过程尾段:心得感受第三步: 提炼要点1_向受灾地区捐款2_ 举办3_ 袭击4_
6、被破坏5_ 非常关心6_ 参加捐款活动7_ 许多第四步:句式升级1学生会在 5 月 25 日举办了一场为灾区捐款的活动。(一般表达)The Students Union held an activity on May 25. The activity was to donate money to the disaster area.(高级表达)_, the Students 3Union held an activity on May 25. (不定式作目的状语)2一些西藏地区靠近尼泊尔的房子在事故中受到破坏。(定语从句)(一般表达)Some houses in Tibet were dest
7、royed in the accident. The houses are close to Nepal.(高级表达)Some houses in Tibet,_ Nepal, were destroyed in the accident.3我们都知道尼泊尔发生了大地震。(一般表达)We all know that a big earthquake hit Nepal.(高级表达)_, a big earthquake hit Nepal.(升级为定语从句)4许多学生参加了在我们图书馆举行的捐赠活动。(一般表达)Many students took part in the donation a
8、ctivity. The activity was held in our library. (高级表达)Many students took part in the donation activity _. (过去分词作定语)_41Unit 6WritingNews reportGuidance新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事件给予明确的、实事求是的报道。新闻报道和新闻评论有时候是结合在一起的,所以在讲述事实之后,可以发表作者的评论。新闻报道的语言偏正式,要求具体、准确、精练。人称可以用第三人称或第一人称。在时态方面,叙述事件用过去时,评论常用一般现在时。Layo
9、ut新闻报道往往分四个部分来写。第一部分:标题。第二部分:导语。大体交代新闻事件,主要包含新闻事件发生的时间、地点、所涉及的人物及缘由等。第三部分:主体。描述事件过程。第四部分:结语。总结全文或发表评论。Useful Expressions1导语部分According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after graduation.根据最近的一项调查,大约 78.9%的大学生想毕业后继续深造。The weather was fine, and a lar
10、ge number of people went to climb the West Hill.天气很好,很多人去爬西山。Great changes have taken place in China.中国发生了巨大的变化。Thanks to Project Hope, great changes have taken place in this western 2country school.多亏了希望工程,西部的这所乡村学校发生了巨大的变化。2主体部分To solve the problem, some measures should be taken.为了解决这个问题,(我们)应该采取一
11、些措施。As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our everyday life.众所周知,互联网在我们的日常生活中起着重要的作用。The number of the injured in the accident has reached more than 12.这场事故中受伤的人已经超过 12 个。3结束语部分We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。With the rapid development of
12、 society, our country will surely have a brighter future.随着社会的快速发展,我们的国家一定会有更光明的未来。I suggest that the government should do something more to solve the serious problems.我建议政府应该做更多的工作来解决这些严重的问题。We have every reason to believe that the development will be a great success.我们完全有理由相信这次发展会很成功。Exercise5 月 2
13、5 日,你校学生会组织了为西藏地震灾区捐款的活动。同学们踊跃参加,共筹得善款 35 000 元。假如你是校英语报的记者李华,请按以下要点用英语写一则新闻报道。1时间、地点、任务、活动;2同学们的反应。注意:31词数 100 左右;2报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不计入总词数);3可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Students Donate Money to Disaster Area_By Li Hua,School NewspaperLayout第一步:明确要求该写作属于应用文新闻报道,主要报道为西藏地震灾区捐款的活动,故应该用一般过去时;以第一、三人称为主。第二步: 确定段落首段:活动简介中
14、段:活动背景及活动过程4尾段:心得感受第三步: 提炼要点1donate_money_to_the_disaster_area 向受灾地区捐款2hold 举办3hit/shake 袭击4be_destroyed 被破坏5show_great_concern_about 非常关心6take_part_in_the_donation_activity 参加捐款活动7a_great_number_of 许多第四步:句式升级1学生会在 5 月 25 日举办了一场为灾区捐款的活动。(一般表达)The Students Union held an activity on May 25. The activi
15、ty was to donate money to the disaster area.(高级表达)In_order_to_donate_money_to_the_disaster_area,_the Students Union held an activity on May 25. (不定式作目的状语)2一些西藏地区靠近尼泊尔的房子在事故中受到破坏。(定语从句)(一般表达)Some houses in Tibet were destroyed in the accident. The houses are close to Nepal.(高级表达)Some houses in Tibet,
16、which_are_close_to Nepal, were destroyed in the accident.3我们都知道尼泊尔发生了大地震。(一般表达)We all know that a big earthquake hit Nepal.(高级表达)As_is_known_to_us , a big earthquake hit Nepal.(升级为定语从句)4许多学生参加了在我们图书馆举行的捐赠活动。(一般表达)Many students took part in the donation activity. The activity was held in our library.
17、 (高级表达)Many students took part in the donation activity held_in_our_library. 5(过去分词作定语)参考范文:Students Donate Money to Disaster AreaIn order to donate money to the disaster area, the Students Union held an activity on May 25. As we know, a big earthquake hit Nepal on April 25.And some houses in Tibet,
18、 which are close to Nepal, were destroyed in the accident. Therefore, to show our concern about the victims, a great number of students in our school took part in the donation activity held in our library. It started from eight oclock and lasted two hours. In the end, 35,000 yuan was collected and given to the Red Cross in our city.We were very glad to give our pocket money away.By Li HuaSchool Newspaper6