1、With the development, Ningbo receives an increasing number of foreigners attention. Recently, Li Lans American friend Susan is coming to Ningbo.Could you help Li Lan to write a short introduction to Ningbo to attract more visitors? Could you help Li Lan to write a short introduction to Ningbo to att
2、ract more visitors? What to write? What is a proper order? How to make it attractive? What details do you think will be introduced? locationlocationfeaturefeatureclimateclimatepopulatiopopulation nethnic ethnic groupsgroupslanguageslanguagesfamous famous figuresfigureslegends/legends/storiesstoriesf
3、amous famous food/drinkfood/drinkbusinessebusinesses shistoryhistoryculturecultureother other namesnamestourist tourist attractioattractionsnstransportatiotransportation nStructureStructureDetailsDetails123456locationlocationfeaturefeatureclimateclimatehistoryhistoryethnic groupethnic grouplanguagel
4、anguageattractionsattractions（famous famous figuresfigures）businessesbusinessesfoodfoodunique Chinese unique Chinese cultureculturegeneral introduction654321detailedmain bodysummaryeconomy?MilitaMilitaryry( (军事军事)?)?transportatiotransportation n?population?legends?other names?Why does the author cho
5、ose to introduce these details, but not others like transportation or military?FocusFocus on the theme, and on the theme, and choose the most related choose the most related detailsdetails Why does the author follow this order? Would it be better if he first introduces food and business, then attrac
6、tions, and finally history?Follow the order of Follow the order of importanceimportance Why is paragraph 3 the longest?Expand on(Expand on(详述详述) the most ) the most attractive detailsattractive details 1.1. FocusFocus on the theme, and on the theme, and choose the most related choose the most relate
7、d detailsdetails2.2. Follow the order of Follow the order of importanceimportance3.3. Expand onExpand on the most the most attractive detailsattractive detailsBy giving all these key details in the order of _, and expanding on _, the author focuses on the theme: Chinatown is a popular _ with unique
8、_.importanceattractionstourist drawChinese cultureWelcomeWelcome to Ningboto NingboAn introduction to attract visitors who are interested in _paraparaDetailsDetailsintroductionmain bodysummary1. Focus on the theme, and choose the most related details2. Follow the order of importance3. Expand on the
9、most attractive detailslocationfeatureclimatepopulationethnic groupslanguagesfamous figureslegends/storiesfamous food/drinkbusinesseshistorycultureother namestourist attractionstransportation The Chinatown in San Francisco is The Chinatown in San Francisco is the biggest in biggest in America, and a
10、lso the oldest. America, and also the oldest. Example (Para 1):Example (Para 1):It is a very popular tourist draw that receives more It is a very popular tourist draw that receives more visitors each year than even the Golden Gate Bridge. visitors each year than even the Golden Gate Bridge. ThThe cl
11、imate is mild all year round, meaning it is e climate is mild all year round, meaning it is always a good time to visit.always a good time to visit.LocationLocation be located in/lie in/stand insimple but effective simple but effective wordswordsvarious sentence patterns various sentence patterns pr
12、operproper figurefigure of speechof speechFeatureFeatureClimateClimatePara 1:Para 1:Location : Location : Features:Features:Climate: Climate: Located in _, the Located in _, the Chinatown there is Chinatown there is _, _, which is a _, whose which is a _, whose climate is _, meaning climate is _, me
13、aning it is always a good time to visit.it is always a good time to visit.San FranciscoSan Franciscot the biggest and oldest in Americahe biggest and oldest in Americap popular tourist drawopular tourist drawm mild all year aroundild all year aroundGeneral introduction to San Francisco Chinatown Gen
14、eral introduction to San Francisco Chinatown 仿写仿写: : Located in Zhejiang Province, Ningbo is a popular tourist draw, whose climate is mild recently, meaning it is a good time to visit.Language:Language: . What started as a residential area for Chinese immigrants then turned into a center for Chinese
15、 culture. The majority of residents in Chinatown are still ethnic Chinese, many of whom do not speak English fluently. This allows visitors to experience a real taste of China.Para 2:Para 2:Detailed information of San Francisco Chinatown Detailed information of San Francisco Chinatown HistorHistory:
16、y: People:People:HemuduHemudu SitesSites 随着河姆渡遗址的发现，宁波被认为是最古老居随着河姆渡遗址的发现，宁波被认为是最古老居住地之一。住地之一。 原本是中国文明发源地，后来转变成海上丝绸之原本是中国文明发源地，后来转变成海上丝绸之路路( (Marine-Silk Road) )的重要枢纽的重要枢纽( (belt) )。With the discovery of Hemudu Sites, Ningbo is recognized as one of the oldest residential areas.What started as a birth
17、place of Chinese civilization then turned into an important belt of the Marine-Silk Road . Historically, with the discovery of Hemudu Sites, Ningbo is recognized as one of the oldest residential areas. However, what started as a birthplace of Chinese civilization then turned into an important belt o
18、f the Marine-Silk Road. paraparaDetailsDetailsExpressions in the Expressions in the bookbookYour own versionYour own versionintroductionmain bodysummaryWelcome to NingboWelcome to NingboAn introduction to attract visitors who are interested in Writing Task: write a paragraph for the main body, introducing famous sites or delicious food in Ningbo.famous sites/ delicious foodTianyige MuseumShipu Ancient TownXikou Scenic Areafried dough twistjuicy peaches
