1、人物介绍写作课件 Procedure 1：文体解析 Tips for Writing a Letter of Introduction 1、人物介绍需要语言简洁，切中要点； 2、介绍需要包括你本人或者所介绍对象 的相关信息；要突出其与众不同之处； 3、时态通常用过去式，也可以穿插使用 现在时； 4、注意使用正确语调，亲密朋友之间语 调可以不必太正式，然而如果是第一次 介绍，则文体必须正式，专业。 Procedure 2：常用词汇 1.热心、友善、慷慨 warmhearted/friendly/ generous 2.非常敬仰 admire the most / hold great admir
2、ation for 3.与分享 share with 4.对严格要求 be strict with 5.关心他人的caring others 6.成为更好的自 己 become a good version of oneself 7.受到良好教育的 be well educated 8.获得称号 be awarded the title of 9.当谈到, 说道 when it comes to 10.受到好评 be well thought of 11.勤于奉献的人 a devoted person 12.帮助陷入困境的人 help those in need 13.树立好榜样 set a
3、good example 14.模范人物 a role model 15.考上重点大学 be admitted into a key university Procedure 3Procedure 3：套用句式：套用句式 1.就我而言,我最敬仰的人是.。 When it comes to me, the person I admire most in the world is 2.他/她品行高尚,乐于助人。 He behaves sweetly with everyone and be willing to help others. 3.无论我经历多少苦难,他总是在支持我。 He always
4、 supports me no matter what my misgivings are. 4.我总是与他分享学校发生的一切。 I share everything with him that happens to me at my school. 5.他总是履行自己的诺言。 He always fulfills all the promises he makes . . Procedure 4: Procedure 4: 写作模板写作模板 6.他不仅对我们严格要求，而且非常关心我们。 Not only is he strict with us, but he also takes grea
5、t care of us. Sample 1Sample 1 Star Star Student of the MonthStudent of the Month Li Hua_(人物特征和荣誉) has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Month”_(突出贡献) for what she has done for our class. On the afternoon of last Saturday, while the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and
6、comfortable rooms, _(所作所为)Li Hua went downtown, took great pains to search, select and manage to find the costumes we wear in the singing contest regardless of the hot weather. _(性格特征) Deeply moved by her efforts，we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. Apart from being warm-hearted
7、 and caring a lot about the class, Li Hua often devotes her spare time to helping others. _.(补充人物优点)She has set a good example to us, so she deserves the honor and we should learn from her._(总结性描述) Sample 2Sample 2 Someone I admire is my cousin Laura. Shes five years older than me, so shes 19 now an
8、d she lives in Bristol. Shes very friendly and confident and shes got long, wavy, brown hair and greeny-brown eyes. Shes medium height, slim and very fit because shes a dancer.（描述 外貌） Shes been dancing since she was six years old and trains every day at her dance school. She wants to be a profession
9、al dancer, but its a very difficult profession because its so competitive. She often dances in shows and Ive been to watch her several times. Her favourite type of dance is modern, which is sometimes a bit strange, but I love watching her dance.（人物突出特点 1） Laura is very busy because she also studies
10、photography at university. Shes a really good photographer and has taken lots of amazing photos of me and my family. Her photos have won a few prizes and last year one of her photos was in an exhibition at an art gallery in London.（人物突出特点2） Laura doesnt have a lot of free time and shes also trying t
11、o learn German because she wants to go to Germany next year to do a photography course. I think Laura is very hard-working and she deserves to become a professional dancer one day. Procedure Procedure 5: 5: 体验原味： 现在，我们一起体验海外原味人物介绍！看 看老外怎么写！ Sample 1 Sample 1 When asked about the person I admire in t
12、he universe, I do not require to look at celebrities or any other big influential names in society. When it comes to me, the person I admire most in the world is my mother. We all have people whom we consider to be highly inspirational and influential to look upon, and in my case, my mother is an ex
13、cellent example of these characters. She is an extraordinary person in my life because of her enduring strength that I dearly admire, and she is also kind as well as supportive. One thing I most admire about my mother for is her strength, which appears to be resistant throughout hard times. My mothe
14、r is a single mother, and she has managed to raise three children all by herself, providing us with a good life and education, while still balancing work. For instance, when my brother and I cleared high school, only one of us hoped to join college because of our financial situation, but she worked
15、two jobs to ensure that we enrolled in college. Single mothers across the globe face financial instability where they are forced to engage in other strategies to extend income to take care of their family. I hold great admiration for my mother because of her determination, how she never backs down,
16、and the way she stands up for what she believes in no matter the hardships that come along. My mother has a striking appearance, but behind this, she is very alluring, admirable, and kind. At first, one can conclude that she is a blunt and cold person because of her quiet nature, but after knowing h
17、er, she turns out to be a friendly, warm-hearted, gentle, and generous person. My mother has been a dedicated individual in the society through volunteering in church during weekends and holidays as well as helping in the local homeless shelters. Kindness is crucial and healthy since one takes pride
18、 in caring for others since they need caring, and it gives people a pleasant feeling. Thanks to my mother, I have grown to be a kind- hearted and deeply-caring person since I believe that its upon me to help those in need whenever I am capable. I am lucky to have a mother who always supports me no m
19、atter my misgivings. No matter the activity I am in or the decision I make, my mother is still there for me to give me advice and encouragement, but at the end of the day, she is at all times by my side. I had a difficult time adapting to my first year in high school, and I almost quit, but my mum l
20、istened to my grievances, and with her support, I managed to finish high school. Supportive behavior is crucial for individual well-being, especially when it comes to emotional support, where a person can be able to relieve distress from a challenge. My mothers supportive character has given me the
21、strength to endure a lot of challenging situations in life as well as learn a lot in what life has to offer. Special people like my mother exist to make our lives better and to mold us to become a better version of ourselves. My mother is a strong spirited person, kind-hearted, has unbreakable stren
22、gth and very supportive. Over the years, I have learned a lot through her character and thoughts, which have molded me to the caring, decent, and brilliant person I am today. The people around us turn out to be the best role models. Sample 2 The person whom I admire the most in my life is my father.
23、 My fathers name is Mr. Manoj Kumar. He works as a bank manager in Axis bank. He is thirty-five years old. He is highly educated and has cleared many competitive exams with flying colors. He is an optimist by thinking. He never thinks anything negative. He is a strong person. He takes all the decisi
24、ons of my life with the consent of my mother. They both are very caring and supportive of each other. They never fight and stay together happily. They balance everything in a very easy way. My father is a nice person. He behaves sweetly with everyone. He is a gentleman for me. He helps in doing my h
25、omework. He gives me good advice. He teaches me good moral values. He teaches me to respect my elders and greet them nicely. He encourages me to do running in the morning as he is a sportive person. Running is his favorite as it keeps our body fit and helps to make our body strong. He tells me vario
26、us health benefits of eating fruits as they contain vital vitamins and minerals that are essential for our body. They make our bodies filled with nutrition. He takes me out every morning and evening. In the evening, he takes me out to have some good food. Sometimes we also go for walking. He tells m
27、e stories of his childhood, how he used to play every time and my grandfather scolded him. On our way, he takes me to the chaat stall every weekend. The stall owner makes tasty chaat and serves on a proper plate. Then, we go forward and reach the park. In the park there are many swings for the child
28、ren, I also meet my friend there. Our family does dinner together. My father is the branch of the family and has taught me to pray before having the food. He told me to wash the hands every time before you have lunch or dinner. He tells me bedtime stories of great personalities like Mahatma Gandhi,
29、Jawahar Lal Nehru, and many others. Each new day. He is a simple person by nature. He is a soft-spoken person. He influences every time he meets a new person. He has helping nature due to which many people say good things about him. My father helps my mother in house chores work also. On Sundays, he
30、 helps my mother to clean the house because our maid goes on holiday. He keeps everything clean and tidy. He knows which thing to keep where and how to place it. He is a great chef also. He can cook Italian food and Indian food too. He takes care of me and my mother whenever we get ill. He stays up
31、all night and gives medicines at the correct time. In the morning, my father drops me to the school and later picks me from there and drops me home. He gets back to his office then. He is a very economical person who makes the budget every month and saves money for extra expenses too. At the end of
32、the month, he calculates the total money spent and tries to reduce out the extra or miscellaneous expenses. On every occasion, he gets new clothes for me. He has good choosing ability to select what is best for me and my mother. He gets gifts for my mother on their wedding anniversary. He gets a gif
33、t for me too on my every birthday. He organizes a birthday party on my birthday. He helps my mother with everything. He invites my friends on my birthdays and takes great care of them. My father is my best friend. I share everything with him that happens to me at my school. He is a proud father and
34、becomes happy when I secure the first position in the class. I am proud to be his daughter. I love my father very much. He always fulfills all the promises he makes to me and so does I. He is my mentor and inspiration in my life. He is the greatest person I have ever met in my life. Procedure 6：高考回顾
35、与习作修改: (2020年高考英语全国卷I)书面表达（满分25分） 你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬 和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 下面习作中有十处错误，请指出并改正。 We had a lot of respectable people around us. There may be our teachers, parents or one of our elder. As for me, my father is the person I respect m
36、ore. My father is a teacher which loves his work and his students very much. He works very hardly every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things for me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patient
37、ly and encourage me overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot of in his work, respecting by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply. 改错参考答案 had改为have There 改为 They elder 改为elders more 改为 most which改为who hardly改为 hard for改为with overcome前加 t
38、o of去掉 respecting改为 respected Procedure 7：你来试试： 姓名姓名出生地出生地出生时间出生时间所受教育所受教育成就成就荣誉荣誉 屠呦呦屠呦呦 浙江宁波 1930.12.3 0 1955年毕 业 于 北 京 大 学 医 学 院 发现治疗热带 疾病疟疾 （malaria）特 效药青蒿素 （artemisinin） 2015年10月获诺贝尔生理或医 学奖 请依据下面图表内容写一篇介绍我国医学领域杰出人 物屠呦呦。 学生习作互批 英语作文评分各档次的给分范围和要求: 阅卷评分细则： 1.整体印象（书写美观，无空行，书写较差影响阅读从10分 以下考虑，空行2行以上从
39、15分以下考虑）。 2.内容全面，漏一内容扣5到6分。 3.表达：时态错误扣3到5分，人称代词、标点符号、词汇错 误每处扣0.5分； 使用高级词汇和复杂句式结构适当加分。 第五档(2125分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 1. 覆盖所有内容要点。 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂 结构或较高级词汇所致 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 5. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档(1620分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 1. 虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 3. 语法
40、结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是 因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 5. 达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档(1115分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 1. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 5. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第二档(610分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 1. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 3. 有一些语
41、法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容 的理解。 4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 5. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 第一档(15分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 1. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未 理解试题要求。 2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 3. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理 解。 4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 5. 信息未能传达给读者。 Tu Youyou was born on December 30, 1930, Ningbo, Zhejiang province, China. Tu studied at th
42、e department of pharmaceutics of Beijing Medical College and earned a degree there in 1955. A 2007 interview shows Tus living conditions are very poor. Her office is in an old apartment building in Dongcheng District, Beijing, prone to heating shortages, and has only two electrical household applian
43、ces - a telephone and a refrigerator, which she uses to store herb samples. Tu is regarded as the Professor of Three Nones - no postgraduate degree, no study or research experience abroad, and not a member of any Chinese national academies, i.e. Chinese Academy of Sciences and Chinese Academy of Eng
44、ineering. She is a great Chinese scientist and phytochemist known for her isolation and study of the antimalarial substance qinghaosu, later known as artemisinin, one of the worlds most- effective malaria-fighting drugs, which inhibits the malaria parasite. Drugs based on artemisinin have led to the survival and improved health of millions of people. For her discoveries, Tu received the 2015 Nobel Prize for Physiology or Medicine.
