1、 Section 写作指导写作指导 夯基提能作业夯基提能作业 写作方法指导写作方法指导 写作方法指导写作方法指导 辩论报告 写作指导 辩论报告属于应用文文体之一，同时又具有议论文的特点，是对某 个话题的辩论。 该类文章一般分为三部分： 第一部分：开门见山，说明自己的看法或观点； 第二部分：列举支持方的观点及其理由；或列举反对方的观点及其 理由； 第三部分：得出结论或给出自己的观点。 文体特征 1文章短小精悍，语言精练，准确易懂； 2时态常用一般现在时。 常用表达 1We had a discussion about whether students should be allowed to.
2、2Im writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to. 3Opinions are divided on this issue./Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 4Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. 5People who are against the idea think that. 6Sixt
3、y percent of the students think it necessary to., but forty percent of the students dont think so. 写作模板 I prefer to _(观点) not because _but because _. _(理由1), which is very good for _.Whats more, _(理由2), as is often the case _.Though perhaps we _，we _(理由3) because we _.We can _. As a whole, I think _
4、much better _than _. 精品展示 一中学班级就生活在城市或乡村的问题进行了辩论。下面是部分辩 论记录要点，请确定你的观点，参照该记录要点并发挥想象，写一篇题 为I Prefer to Live in the City/the Coun- tryside的短文。词数80左右。 Where do you prefer to live, in the big city or in the quiet countryside？ the city the country The city： so many things to do; make more money The countr
5、y： too quiet；boring；no jobs The city： very noisy; crowded The country： quiet; enjoy so much in nature； grow food on a farm 审题谋篇 第一步明确要求 该写作属于辩论作文，故要用第_人称来写；文章的主题内容是 喜欢住在城市还是乡村，选择其中的一种去写作。时态用_。 第二步确定段落 本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手： Para.1开门见山，阐明观点； Para.2列举理由； Para.3再次表明观点。 三 一般现在时 第三步核心词汇 1_对有益 2_远离 3_挣钱 4_过着幸福的
6、生活 be good for far from make money lead a happy life 第四步句式升级 1我喜欢住在农村，不是因为我出生在农村，而是因为我喜欢农 村生活。 (一般表达)Although I was not born in the countryside, I prefer to live in the countryside because I like the country life. (高级表达)I prefer to live in the countryside _ because I was born in the countryside _ be
7、cause I like the country life. not but 2乡下远离喧嚣，也不像城市里那样拥挤。 (一般表达)The countryside is far from the noise and not as crowded as in the city. (高级表达)The countryside is far from the noise and not crowded, _ in the city. as is often the case 参考范文 I Prefer to Live in the Countryside I prefer to live in the
8、countryside not because I was born in the countryside but because I like the country life. In the country the air is fresher and there is less pollution, which is very good for health.Whats more, the countryside is far from the noise and not crowded, as is often the case in the city. Though perhaps
9、we make less money in the countryside, we still lead a happy life because we dont need so much money. We can grow our own food and enjoy “the really green food” As a whole, I think the country life is much better for peoples health than the city life. 亮点点评 该范文结构完整，作者首先开门见山，提出主题；然后列举理由； 最后再次表明观点。要点齐全
10、，语言规范地道。使用了whats more，as a whole等过渡衔接语，句式上，作者巧妙地使用了定语从句，以及 not.but.等高级句式，亮点频出，表达形式多样。总之，该范文是一篇 朗朗上口的优秀范文，值得学习。 正方观点(企业的责任)反方观点(家长的责任) 1.为了赚钱，建了太多的西式 快餐店 1.家长借口工作忙，不做饭，常带孩子 吃快餐，养成了不良饮食习惯 2.餐饮业出售不健康食品2.许多家长不能分辨饮食优劣 3.制作大量广告，吸引儿童去 吃美味但不利于健康的食品 3.不重视孩子的体育锻炼 正方呼吁：制定法律，禁止出售不健康食品 反方呼吁：家长要引导孩子学会选择 Who is to
11、 blame for the obese children the enterprises or the parents? The number of obese children in our country is increasing by 8 percent each year. People are very concerned about it.In my opinion，_ _ _ 参考范文： (反方) Who is to blame for the obese children the enterprises or the parents? The number of obese
12、 children in our country is increasing by 8 percent each year. People are very concerned about it.In my opinion，parents are to blame. First, the parents often take their children to find fast-food restaurants with the excuse that they are too busy to prepare meals for their children at home, so grad
13、ually their children have formed a bad eating habit.Another reason, I think, is that the parents cant tell junk foods from nutritious foods so that they cant help their children to make a right choice.Besides, most of the time the parents ignore how important it is for their children to take regular
14、 exercise. Thats why their children put on weight so easily. I suggest that parents should pay attention to their childrens health and help them to make a wise choice of what to eat and what to do. (正方)Who is to blame for the obese children the enterprises or the parents? The number of obese childre
15、n in our country is increasing by 8 percent each year. People are very concerned about it.In my opinion，enterprises are to blame. First, for the purpose of making money, they have built so many western style fast-food restaurants.The fast food is known for containing too much fat. Secondly, some foo
16、d industries sell junk foods and there are no laws to stop them from doing so.And besides, so many advertisements attract children to the foods that are delicious but actually unhealthy.All these factors are the causes of the large number of obese children in China. I suggest that strict laws should be made to forbid selling unhealthy foods. Its only when laws are made that the situation will be improved. Children are our future and we should do something to make sure that they grow healthy and strong.
