1、人教版八年级英语下册 Unit 6 同步写作指导 本单元围绕“讲故事”这一话题，介绍如何用英语讲故事。故事大都属于记叙文。一般 要有故事的内容（what）、人物（who）、时间（when）、地点（where）、起因（why）、 和情节发展（how）.要用的时态主要是一般过去时，常用第三人称。 写作指导 讲述故事时，可按照时间顺序展开。如可用表示时间的词语 once upon a time, one day 引入故事；用 when, then, as soon as 叙述故事的发展；用 in the end 引出故事的结尾。这些词语的使用使故事情节紧凑、脉络清晰。 必背词汇 story 故事 n
2、ovel 小说 remind 提醒；使想起 moving 令人感动的 interesting 有趣的 relaxing 放松的 exciting 兴奋的 educational 有教育意义的 必背短语 long long ago 很久很久以前 once upon a time 从前 the next day 第二天 fall in love 爱上 remind sb. of sth. 使某人想起. a little bit 有点儿 Instead of 代替；而不是 in ones opinion 在某人看来 decide to do 决定做某事 get over 克服 for the fir
3、st time 第一次 What do you think about? = What do you think of ? = How do you like? 你认为怎么样？ 写作案例 你所在的英语俱乐部开展了英语故事会活动，你打算分享“愚公移山”的故事。 请根据下面的提示词语， 写一篇短文为此做准备。 提示词语： 孙子 grandson 神 god 被感动 be moved 要求：90 词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总 词数。 Hello, everyone! Today I will share the story of Yu Gong Moves a Mountain with
4、 all of you._Thats all. Thank you. 高分范文： Hello, everyone! Today I will share the story of Yu Gong Moves a Mountain with all of you.Once upon a time, there was an old man called Yu Gong. Although he was almost 90, he wanted to move the mountains. A “clever” man called Zhi Sou said, “You are too old t
5、o move them.” Yu Gong said, “If I die, my sons will do this. And if my sons die, my grandsons will continue.” Then a god was moved. So he sent two gods to help him move them.From the story, I learned that nothing is impossible if we work hard and never give up!Thats all. Thank you. 写作实践 假设你是王芳，请根据提示
6、给你的英国笔友 Mary 写一封邮件，向她讲述 后羿射日的故事，并请她谈谈对该故事的看法。 名称 内容 后羿射日 1.1. 从前天上有从前天上有 1010 个太阳，天气酷热，万物无个太阳，天气酷热，万物无 法生长法生长 2.2.剑术超群的后羿射掉九个太阳，只留下一剑术超群的后羿射掉九个太阳，只留下一 个太阳个太阳 3.3.人们从此安居乐业人们从此安居乐业 参考词汇：heat 高温；live and work in peace 安居乐业 Dear Mary， Today Id like to share a famous Chinese story with you. It is called
7、HouYi Shoots the Suns._Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Wang Fang 参考答案 Dear_Mary， Today Id like to share a famous Chinese story with you. It is called Hou Yi Shoots the Suns.Once upon a time, there were ten suns in the sky. The weather was so hot that nothing could live on the earth. Man
8、y people and animals died because of the heat. A man called Hou Yi was very brave. He was good at shooting. To solve the problem, he went up to a very high mountain and shot down nine suns, leaving the last one in the sky. From then on, people lived and worked in peace.Do you like the story? What do
9、 you think of Hou Yi?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Wang_Fang 范文背诵 A How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighted One day somebody sent Cao Cao an elephantCao Cao wanted to know how heavy the elephant was，but there was nothing big enough to weigh it onCao Chong told his father he could weig
10、h the elephant if he had a big boat and a lot of heavy stonesCao Cao and some other people were very surprised，but still he ordered his men to get everything readyWhen they led the elephant down into the boat， the water came up， then Cao Chong marked the water lineThen they drove the elephant onto t
11、he bank and put the heavy stones in the boat until the water came up to the same lineAt last，Cao Chong told the men to weigh each of the stonesIn this way，he weighed the elephant. How to keep safe? As teenagers, we should always keep ourselves safe.But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my ideas
12、. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also,we should eat healthily and safely. Eating bad food will not good to our health. Last, when we come to school or go home, we must obey the traffic rules.Summer is coming, and we must remember its dangerous to swim in the river. In one word, safety must be the first thing! Thank you!
