1、20212021 高考英语四层写作阶梯高考英语四层写作阶梯写作层级二写作层级二 整齐和谐的并列句整齐和谐的并列句 整齐和谐的并列句整齐和谐的并列句 并列句是用连词或分号把两个或两个以上的简单句连接而成的句子，在这一句并列句是用连词或分号把两个或两个以上的简单句连接而成的句子，在这一句 型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。型中需要注意连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。 1both .and .“既既又又” On the Internet, people can seek information about their favorite stars and buy tic
2、kets at a discount as well, which is both timesaving and economical.(2017 江苏高江苏高 考书面表达考书面表达) 在互联网上，人们可以搜索他们最喜欢的明星的信息，也可以打折买在互联网上，人们可以搜索他们最喜欢的明星的信息，也可以打折买 票，既省时又省钱。票，既省时又省钱。 2either .or .“或者或者或者或者；不是；不是就是就是” People can either give them as gifts or hang them in their houses. 人们可以把它人们可以把它 们当做礼物送出去，或者挂在
3、自己的房间里。们当做礼物送出去，或者挂在自己的房间里。 3neither .nor .“既不既不也不也不” In autumn, it s neither too hot nor too cold.(2014 天津高考满分作文天津高考满分作文) 秋天，天秋天，天 气既不太热也不太冷。气既不太热也不太冷。 4not only .but (also) .“不仅不仅而且而且” I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the
4、greatest astronauts in the world.(2015 安徽高考书面表安徽高考书面表 达达) 我真的想采访他因为他不仅是第一位进入太空的中国人，而且还是世界上最伟我真的想采访他因为他不仅是第一位进入太空的中国人，而且还是世界上最伟 大的宇航员之一。大的宇航员之一。 5not .but .“不是不是，而是，而是” In my opinion, the son refuses to communicate with his mother not because he has no time but because he s unwilling to. 在我看来，儿子拒绝与他的
5、母亲交流不在我看来，儿子拒绝与他的母亲交流不 是因为他没时间而是因为他不愿意。是因为他没时间而是因为他不愿意。 6.while/whereas “然而，然而，却却” Some of the studies show positive results, whereas others do not. 有一些研究结有一些研究结 果令人满意，然而其他的则不然。果令人满意，然而其他的则不然。 7祈使句祈使句/名词词组名词词组and/or/otherwise陈述句陈述句 Keep it in mind and gradually we can gain this good learning habit a
6、nd benefit from it.(2013 四川高考满分作文四川高考满分作文) 记住它，我们就能逐渐地养成这个好的学习习惯记住它，我们就能逐渐地养成这个好的学习习惯 并从中获益。并从中获益。 It is really very dangerous. One more step, and the baby will fall into the well. 真危险。再多迈一步，这个小孩就会掉进井里。真危险。再多迈一步，这个小孩就会掉进井里。 Study hard, or/or else/otherwise you will fail in your exams. 努力学习，否则你努力学习，否
7、则你 会考试不及格的。会考试不及格的。 More healthy food, or you ll break down sooner or later. 多吃健康食品， 不然你多吃健康食品， 不然你 的身体迟早会垮掉。的身体迟早会垮掉。 8.when .“这时这时” (1)sb. was doing sth. when .“某人正在做某事，这时”“某人正在做某事，这时” We were having a meeting when someone broke in. 我们正在开会，这时有人闯我们正在开会，这时有人闯 了进来。了进来。 (2)sb. was about to do sth. whe
8、n .“某人正要做某事，这时”“某人正要做某事，这时” I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.(2014 福建高考满分作文福建高考满分作文) 我正要放弃， 这时我父亲走过来并鼓励我坚持下去。我正要放弃， 这时我父亲走过来并鼓励我坚持下去。 (3)sb. had just done sth. when .“某人刚做完某事，这时”“某人刚做完某事，这时” I had just finished sweeping the floor when the telephone rang. 我刚刚
9、拖完地，我刚刚拖完地， 这时电话铃响了。这时电话铃响了。 【即时演练即时演练】 用并列句补全句子用并列句补全句子 1他刚要走就有人敲门。他刚要走就有人敲门。 He was on the point of leaving when_someone_knocked_at_the_door. 2你不但要和他们分享你的学习经验，而且一定要向他们敞开心扉。你不但要和他们分享你的学习经验，而且一定要向他们敞开心扉。 Not_only_should_you_share_your_study_experience_with them, but_(also) you must keep your heart o
10、pen to them. 3是你所说的话而不是你所做的事使你的同学感到生气。是你所说的话而不是你所做的事使你的同学感到生气。 It_is_not_what_you_had_done_but_what_you_had_said that annoyed your classmates. 【课时提能训练】 .用适当的并列连词填空 1(2017 全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达)Not_only will all kinds of papercutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day, but_(al
11、so) a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held as well. 2Seize the chance, or/or_else/otherwise you ll regret some day. 3Another try, and you ll achieve a success. 4 The young man wanted to help the dog, but as he approached, the dog started to bark. 5We were about to set off when it su
12、ddenly began to rain. 6Some people believe smoking is harmful to health while others consider it is helpful reducing in working pressure. .用并列句补全句子用并列句补全句子 1(2017 全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达)因此，如果你努力学习的话，展览不仅可以帮助你因此，如果你努力学习的话，展览不仅可以帮助你 更好地了解中国民间艺术作品，而且可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。更好地了解中国民间艺术作品，而且可以帮助你获得一些剪纸技巧。 Therefore,the ex
13、hibition can not only help you have a better understanding of Chinese folk art works, but can also help you acquire some papercutting skills if you try hard to learn. 2(2017 全国卷全国卷书面表达书面表达)别犹豫，如果你有什么问题就问我。别犹豫，如果你有什么问题就问我。 Don t_hesitate_and_ask_me if you have any questions. 3(2017 江苏高考书面表达江苏高考书面表达)票
14、价正在上涨。因此，电影业应该做出更大的努力票价正在上涨。因此，电影业应该做出更大的努力 来吸引更多的观众。来吸引更多的观众。 The ticket price is on the increase. Therefore,_the_film_industry_should make_greater_efforts_to_attract more viewers. 4(2014 广东高考写作广东高考写作)虽然她是一位普通妇女但是确实值得尊敬。虽然她是一位普通妇女但是确实值得尊敬。 She is an ordinary woman but_she_is_really_worth_respecting
15、. 5(2013 重庆高考满分作文重庆高考满分作文)因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情因此，从现在起，让我们不要在一些不重要的事情 上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。上浪费时间，而要经常与我们的父母进行推心置腹的谈话。 So, from now on, let s not_waste_our_time_on_unimportant_things_but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while. .请按以下内容要点写一封电子邮件，尽可能多地使用并列句请按以下内容要点写一封电子邮件，尽可能多地使
16、用并列句 假定你是李华。某国际中学生杂志邀请你在“国际交换生项目”专栏中分享你假定你是李华。某国际中学生杂志邀请你在“国际交换生项目”专栏中分享你 作为国际交换生的经历。请给该栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：作为国际交换生的经历。请给该栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1遭遇的困难；遭遇的困难； 2问题的解决；问题的解决； 3你的感想。你的感想。 注意：注意：1.词数词数 100 左右；左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear editor, Last year, I went
17、to England for a student exchange programme. Yours， Li Hua 参考范文： Dear editor， Last year, I went to England for a student exchange programme.Before I went, I was quite proud of my English, but everyone in England spoke so fast that I couldn t make out what they were saying.Being in a completely diffe
18、rent culture was scaring and I even wanted to go straight back home. But things soon got better and better.The homestay family was not only very kind, but also the boy that I was staying with was keen on football, which made my stay more enjoyable and stressfree.Besides, I developed an interest in E
19、nglish cooking and I ate pasta and international food just as I do at home! Being an exchange student not only offers me a chance to improve my English but also makes me learn more about the foreign culture and people.The best part of all is knowing that I could cope, even in such a difficult situation. Yours， Li Hua
